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Payback, My friend.Dear Deviantart,

I was welcomed here with open arms, a smile placed on my face,
Sitting back, relaxing, writing. Nobody was on my case.
I have really enjoyed it here; I've been a member for just a week.
With the power of my mind, and the freedom to speak.

Members have been so kind, visiting my page,
I have never felt trapped, like I'm in a cage.
I've always had the ability to speak my mind.
Oh dear members, you are just too kind.

Each day I log on, I receive Watchers, Fav's and Llama's too,
I often sit back, and wonder. Can this be true?
Constantly getting so much attention and respect,
I had over one thousand page views la

RegretI stood there and made a commitment to you,
So why couldn't you just follow it through.
Your eyes wandering around the place,
Leaving me standing there looking into space.
I love you too much, Please feel the same,
I'll push my feelings towards you, make you feel the shame.
The things I did to spare your feelings,
For you to throw it all back, without any reasons.
You are one stupid little man,
They wont forgive you, know I can.
I'm a fool that fell in love.
Felt like I was surrounded by that little white dove.
All it was, were lies and regrets,
Standing there puffing your silly cigarette.
You can go back to her, I don

50 Points - Character Contest:bulletred: Win 30 points :bulletred:
I'm working on a book for the whole of deviantart to read, It will come in stages of chaptors. I'm holding a small contest to see if anybody can draw my charactors. Below I will give you information on each charactor, and the scene I would like you to draw. The winner will be chosen by Me and a friend. Who is not related to Deviantart. The contest ends 08/03/2012 have fun, and good luck to all.

:bulletgreen: Sophia :bulletgreen:
Sophia is a young, teenage turkish girl. An age of 19, she has a slim build, beautiful silk like, red hair hoving over her shoulders. She is smaller than Stefan, My second Ch

Battle of Hearts,When you're in love, things often go up and down,
You tell them to leave, and then you want them around.
We are all participating in this Battle of Hearts,
When your world stops, it will always restart.

I believe I've fallen in love before,
When Cupid came knocking at my door.
For the boy I loved was my dearest friend,
Such a terrible loss when it came to an end.

I still think the feeling has stayed with me,
Will it ever let me go? Let me become free?
Only time will decide, if my heart will heal,
Only then, Happiness will I truly feel.

So you see my friends, Love is there in your heart,
When one comes to an end, another sha

KurunaGirl Birthday Wish.The boy you like isn't worth your smile,
He'll realise, even if it takes a while.
When he see's, how amazing you've always been,
He'll come and try looking, but you wont be seen.

There are so many other fish in the sea,
We can look for them together, you and me.
You don't need that certain guy to have a good time,
If you did I wouldn't of sat here and made you this ryhme.

Sit back, relax enjoy your birthday now its here,
Otherwise you'll have to wait another year!
Remember, the guy isn't worth you, my friend,
You want one that will stick by you, till the very end.

Life after LifeFrom where I am today, to where I was has changed dramatically, the places I've been, people I've met, and the experiences I have dealt with; even thinking about it can send my mind into a thousand thoughts. If you're thinking, "Has she won the lottery?" then you are wrong. Maybe, " Traveled the world?" or "Been to Jail?"Then you are also incorrect. Winning the lottery would be a dream, but considering what I have today I couldn't trade that for money, for travelling, anything. Before, I was a pregnant teenager confused and scared over the events that were about to happen, although I wasn't alone. I was devoted to a boyfriend with

Bigger than beforeIf i go up, you go down,
When I stand still you turn around.
We are so different, yet we are the same,
Our whole friendship is like one big game.
I'll laugh and sing and hold you tight,
I'm sure you think of me, when your alone at night.
Our friendship was the most powerful thing,
Untill you got down, and held out a ring.
Right then, you knew the moment was right,
My whole face filled with delight.
I held out my hand, with a smiile,
I hope this feeling will last a while.
You are not just my friend, but my soul mate,
So lets run down the Isle, we can't be late.
To commit ourselves to a life of fun,
Lounging around, pla

1000 POINTS GIVE AWAY + CONTEST NOW CLOSED1000 points for free!!! What shall you do to get them?
EDIT: END DATE CHANGED, SO MORE CAN GET THE CHANCE TO JOIN
This give away will be announced on FEB 29
Suggest yourself or a friend and give me a good reason why you or she/he should get the points.
More then 100 words and let it be a good one.

spread the word.
What I want from this:
Nothing at all, just a thanks.. if you want to give me that.
I am simply doing this because the world is a damn dark place and we need some giving people. And honestly I have been in hell these past months, and people gave me their soul and heart. I am now gonna try to give back, in any way I can..
You will pay to see my art?? Tell me more
I will pay all the way to 10 feb so hurry up.
I will pay to see your art, in points of course. But it is a catch.
It must be art I like, colored and well-made. Read how to get paid. But do not feel sad if I do not give yo

PM Giveaway (WINNER FOUND)EDIT: WINNER FOUND! Thanks to everyone who participated, please come back for the New Year Edition giveaway!
Since dART is so kind to offer a double up on premium membership purchases this week (that I have already taken advantage of),
I shall be offering one person 1 month of PM - which actually will be 2 months! But please be quick~
The Prize:

~~One TWO~~ I'll pay for 3 months = 6 months with PM
#127:
:iconTheArtisticGenius:
So, how to join? All you have to do is;

Just this journal so that I know who has entered
It's as simple as that, nothing more, nothing less, which mean you do NOT need to;

Watch me (because once you unwatch me, my fragile heart will break!)

Create a journal about this (simply because I hate doing that myself)

Give me a llama (but if you decide to give 1, you'll get one in return)

Fave any of my works (only do that if you actually like what I make)
:b

Ocean,Footprints dipped into the delicate sand as the seagulls fly around,
Little kids enjoying there ice-cream not making a sound.
Donkey's walking forward and back, the tide gently touching their feet,
Oh the seaside, the beach, A lovely place to smile and greet.

So many people gather and go for a swim, a paddle or a dip,
As they look around them, in the distance a beautiful ship.
The sound of the waves sitting the sand, one you cannot beat,
For coming to the seaside, can be such a treat.

Surfers, Divers and swimmers too, paddle out to the sea,
Exploring the ocean, the fish below gliding, swimming free.
How I love to watch the wave

COMPETITION FOR 1,500 POINTS!NOTE: You have to watch my friend !Martyna-Photography to be able to win this, but please don't tell her I'm doing this, okay? Don't ask her for points, don't bring it up with her. She's my friend, and I don't want that on her page.
To win 1,500

do the following:
1. Watch !Martyna-Photography, without telling her you're doing it because of this.
2. Comment. The comment must contain a dummy

(: dummy: with no space). Make it a funny comment, because these do appear in my mail

3. Fave the journal.
Standard one comment a person, ends 2nd of January, if you want a reply, write on my page.
NOTE: Want people to watch you next time maybe? If you're good enough, I'll put you in a journal! Or put up a "fave this deviation"! Just note me!

*ENDED* Point/PM Giveaway! (Prize Update!)Ended
Winners
*More prizes added!*
My account turns two years old on November 12,
and what better way to celebrate than with a giveaway?
There will be:
5 prizes of a 3 month PM (No point equivalent)
2 prizes of a 1 month PM (No point equivalent)
2 prizes of 100
5 prizes of 50
10 prizes of 20
How to enter:
Fave this journal
Leave a comment
Earn an extra entry by making a journal advertising this.
Be sure to send me the link.
My current watchers are also given an extra chance.
New watchers will not receive one.
I won't tell you if you win, you'll have to check.
Drawing will occur on Nov 12.
Winner will be picked through random.org.
Numbers here.

Raffle PromoEDIT::
~ No one claimed their prizes for already 2 times. So I am restarting this raffle.
~ When you won the raffle, you should come and get your prize, if you never told me about it in a week, your prize will be invalid, and I won't give you any of the points.
~ So I will use a random number generator to pick 2 winners.

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ANYWAYS.....
To win 60

All you have to do is:
Favorite this journal http://yamaharu.deviantart.com/journal/Contest-Entries-287465681 and watch me I hope you watch my gallery too.
~ By March 10, I will randomly pick 2 winners.
I am thinking of doing this occasionally as of now.

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And then!!! The new contest that I am making!!

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Breakdown Recovery

by *ThatCanonKid, Feb 8, 2012, 1:22:28 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

I'm sitting on my chair, so angry, so tense,
My head is spinning, it doesn't make sense.
Screaming, shouting! Letting the words pour out,
Not thinking, hurting myself, without a doubt.

Everybody must come across this feeling before,
Crying, shouting, wanting this no more.
I wonder if I can make it disappear,
Before I drown in that one little tear.

I scream at my friends when they try to help,
Bellowing at them to stop, making them yelp.
I don't want to feel trapped in my own stupid fear,
Please, anyone make this feeling disappear!

It all happened a month ago, when I lost my lover,
Because he betrayed me, and went for another.
I hope he realised, the pain I feel,
Only he can make my heart fully heal.

This feeling has gone from inside my head,
I think it's time to say goodbye and go to bed.
For tomorrow I shall wake up, and smile to myself,
I am now, so calm, and have regained my health.

Breakdown Recoveryby *ThatCanonKid

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Breakdown Recovery
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Please do not use my work under any circumstance unless its your commission or you have my written permission.

Please Critique this work, I will give out points for the best.

Thankyou,
All comments and

are highly appreciated.

Critique by =NikkiiQ Feb 9, 2012, 3:56:06 AM

I feel so sorry for you honey, that you have to feel his way. I already hate this guy *angel face* just for hurting you so bad! I can almost feel your pain.
as you know, I just love your writing style, it seems very simple, but the way you use it, it is just awesome! Some of your poems are just like little songs. Although the most of them are a bit sad, maybe that is just what I like about them the most, I don't know.
But remembr, there will be another lover! I once felt the same as you do, but the boyfriend I've got now is so much better. You will be fine!

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~crazi-4-muffinz Feb 8, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

I know this feeling well </3
I'm sorry you're feeling this way, too :<
I love the poem, though.
Faved (:

*ThatCanonKid Feb 9, 2012 Student Writer

Plenty of people do, Its such a shame.

Thanks, I started off with the poem, then decided after I'd calmed down to turn it into something that can help others, I hate the feeling and wouldn't like anyone to experience it.

*TokalaSoul Feb 8, 2012 Student Traditional Artist

_{This is wonderful. ;3

But I'm sorry you had to go though that.... I know exactly how you feel~}

*ThatCanonKid Feb 9, 2012 Student Writer

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^
It's a horrible feeling. I know, but I suppose things can only look brighter.

*TokalaSoul Feb 9, 2012 Student Traditional Artist

_Always.~

*ThatCanonKid Feb 10, 2012 Student Writer

~EvaniSaransari Feb 8, 2012

I know this feeling well.. Your work is beautiful, although I'm sorry you've had to experience this feeling

*ThatCanonKid Feb 8, 2012 Student Writer

Thank you, When I was in the situation before I wrote this, instead of doing something stupid that I would regret. I'm really happy that you enjoy my work. I uploaded it so people could read, relate and learn.

=NikkiiQ Feb 8, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I feel so sorry for you hun! Maybe I'll write a critique tomorrow

*ThatCanonKid Feb 8, 2012 Student Writer

Thank you,

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